This fic is so amazing and so hot, I just can't get over it. I've wanted to read a Bruce/Jason scenario like this since Jason returned years ago, but the way you drew out the scene to include so much all at once - I'm blown away. Especially the moments where you allowed Bruce and Jason to ask and answer questions about each other - through their bodies, their playacting, their words - it was so deft, I am in awe. Every word, every line of this is perfect. It took me forever to read because I was just savoring - and then I read it again, and again. The dialogue, the characterizations, the sex - oh dear lord. It was a brilliant scenario to begin with - Jaybird and Matches - and a tough place to write them from, with Jason being Red Hood. And then you included Robin kink! I'm trying to be coherent here, but it is difficult - I loved this too much for words. You are amazing.
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Date: 2010-06-18 05:27 am (UTC)