First time I like this pairing. Your use of Matches is impressive. And the story is beautifully written. It's a porn story where there is really a story, a good one, which is well served by the porn. Awesome.
(And fucking Bruce. He has to, at last, *try* to keep the poor Jay with him.)
Et je suis vraiment impressionnée par l'impression de fluidité de la langue qui se dégage de ton texte. Tu as doublement toute mon admiration.
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Date: 2009-05-11 12:01 am (UTC)And the story is beautifully written. It's a porn story where there is really a story, a good one, which is well served by the porn. Awesome.
(And fucking Bruce. He has to, at last, *try* to keep the poor Jay with him.)
Et je suis vraiment impressionnée par l'impression de fluidité de la langue qui se dégage de ton texte. Tu as doublement toute mon admiration.