First time I like this pairing. Your use of Matches is impressive.
And the story is beautifully written. It's a porn story where there is really a story, a good one, which is well served by the porn. Awesome.

(And fucking Bruce. He has to, at last, *try* to keep the poor Jay with him.)

Et je suis vraiment impressionnée par l'impression de fluidité de la langue qui se dégage de ton texte. Tu as doublement toute mon admiration.