ext_19682: (Dune_Leto Atreide II)
ext_19682 ([identity profile] oximore.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] runespoor 2011-10-18 10:13 pm (UTC)

Oh, I liked the flow of this!

"She shoots him a look. Midway between 'the memo that says we don't mention these things, did you miss it' and 'how do you possibly need to ask'."

&

"“Slept with the boss,” Jason says, succinct and nonchalant."

This win everything. Those two would be epic.

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