woah, hold your horses~ i really didnt mean to sound mean or anything. it was just that, they way you've written the 1st part of the story, which involved tons of 'YOUR insightfull-ness'style was kinda erm... unfamiliar for me. that was why i didnt really enjoy reading them. whereas your 2nd part was cleaner. just so you know, your story DEFINATELY got me 'arching my back in pleasure' for more MORE and MORE of it.
ps: so sorry for sounding so mean...i really hoped i didnt hurt your feelings. sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry TT3TT
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Date: 2006-12-01 03:07 pm (UTC)ps: so sorry for sounding so mean...i really hoped i didnt hurt your feelings. sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry TT3TT